On the surface the rendition of this form might seem alright. However, if I were to scrutinize it strictly using the requirements outlined in Grandmaster Wei’s book then I can but lament silently at the lack of adherence to the principles.
This is what I mean by if you practice with lack of standards then the only sure result is a lacklustre performance that transforms a form that is to be trained with intention into a form that is sans the strict requirements for mobilizing the intention leading to tremendous loss of quality.
Maybe I am harsh by saying this but barely half a year has Grandmaster Wei left this world and the standard of deviation of the style is already below the level of expectations. Sad but I suppose this is to be expected.